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Ode to the Motor City
I take to the line, my feet on the steady
The creature beside snarls – he's ready.
A spark makes a shock and the feet start to fly
I shoot across the city with a lion by my side.
Pass lights – pass lakes – pass years of decay
The shoeless kids chasing our dust as they play.
We sidestep the world downshifting for speed
The lion beside me can tell what we need.
Rubber feet rolling beneath my metal cage
We tear through the streets like fire on a page.
Gripping the wheel I'm along for the ride
Pistons pump oil through the heart of this pride.
Only broken bottles bounce my headlight back
Rising ashes of industry turn the sky black
But above it all is the sound of the poor
Only my motor can drown out it's roar.
Though my rolling feet may take me away
In the motor city my heart will stay.
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Loss
The muddled gray cylinder blurred as it trailed into the light in the distance. He walked towards the brighter parts, counting the dark rectangles that passed on his right three… four… five… He turned into the 6th. The lumpy shapes paired to familiar voices were oddly strange. He knew the persons the sounds belonged to, but he didn't even know what that meant anymore. He could feel his mouth, lips and tongue, making the shapes, performing the actions, but there was no understanding of what the sounds were anymore. Motion becomes meaning, as a thin part of a lump moves up and then back and forth. He reciprocates. He robotically moves to what he knows is a chair, though he does not recognize it as such anymore. He sits, zooming in on the orange blur sitting on what he believes is a table. Holding the orange blur, he focuses, and refines. It is a folder. He opens.
For the first time, he can not read it. He can not make it out anymore. He moves it closer, zooms in more, but
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DarkPsychosis Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2007
Thanks for your comments :-)
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Ro-BAWT Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
hihi

I had to drop by so I could thank-you for the :+fav: on Mutation
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CykeADelic Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
... and thanks a lot for the great comments on my work. i really feel honoured :)
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CykeADelic Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
thank you so much for the :+fav:īs and the :+devwatch: :hug:
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LadyArabella Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007
Hi there :wave:

I'd just like to thank you for your comment on .Lat Loose, Have Fun. in my gallery! I really appreciate all the favourites, comments, and just general feedback that I get from Deviants like you! :heart: So thank you again, and I hope that you have a great day :rose:

-Lady Arabella
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Niichts Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the watch!
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Schatten-Drache Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for adding my self portrait to your fav! [link] :aww:
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forexus Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2007
wow thanx for the comment!
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cricket88x1 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2007
Dear Ceri, I love you.
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DevCageR Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Hi and thx for the Fav!!! ;)
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